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Countdown to May Forms Challenge Submissions

Saturday, May 25th @ 3:00pm

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Welcome to #My-Soul-Bleeds-Ink

May - Poetry Forms Challenge

Journal Entry: Sun May 5, 2013, 10:35 AM



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:bulletred: The Canzone is an Italian form that resembles a sonnet.
:bulletwhite: It is less fixed in its meter, syllabic count and length.
:bulletgreen:  A Canzone can be between seven and twenty lines long, with approximately ten to eleven syllables per line.
:bulletred: It can also be between one and seven stanzas long.
:bulletwhite: There is no rhyme scheme, therego, you can do any rhyme scheme as long as it is consistent in rhyme and rhythm.

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Canzone 1
By: Dante Alighieri
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Ladies that have intelligence in love,
Of my own lady I will speak with you;
Not that I hope to count her praises through,
But telling what I may, to ease my mind.
And I declare that when I speak thereof
Love sheds such perfect sweetness over me
That if my courage failed not, certainly
To him my listeners must be all resigned.
Wherefore I will not speak in such large kind
That mine own speech should foil me, which were base;
But only will discourse of her high grace
In these poor words, the best that I can find,
With you alone, dear dames and damozels:
'Twere ill to speak thereof with any else.

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Rules


:bulletred: You may write more than one entry
:bulletwhite: Minimal mature content allowed; appropriate filters must be on
:bulletgreen: The champion will be decided via a poll vote
:bulletred: Please submit entries into the Contest Entries folder
:bulletwhite: Have fun and experiment with the form

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Time Frame


:bulletblue: May 1 – May 25 -:- Submission Time
:bulletwhite: May 26 – May 30 -:- Voting Time
:bulletred: May 31 -:- Champion Announced

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Any questions? Don’t hesitate to ask `MagicalJoey

Have fun,
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J


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Up to four works of an artist selected weekly by the admins.

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This week's feature is:
:iconartistically-insane:~Artistically-Insane

The featured works are:
A sea of Lies-sonnetMy family drowned in a sea of lies,
Murdering lips brought the sea upon them,
My eyes see their lies as everyone dies,
They have no idea what it is aime.

He stole my innocence and they all knew,
One by one I watched them sink with a smile,
On a cloud looking down the deadly blue,
Two hold on tight one's hands old and fragile.

They cling to the island of memories,
The second young and clueless as I was,
They wash up on shore with apologies,
She betrayed me like everyone else does.

Forgiving arms wrap and don't dare release,
You blood related liars rest in peace.
So blind. . .I fell,
caution flashed in my mind constantly,
your touch was cold,
I love cold.
Your words felt so real,
so genuine,
I took them in foolishly.

you were so perfect in my eyes,
I was so blind,
I let you get dangerously close,
stupid love!
the past flagged its warnings,
but i ignored.

Lips touched,
tongues danced,
it felt amazing,
it felt real,
I was so blind.

I fell deeper,
oops. . .
sneaking around in the dark,
messing around in the park,
I was so blind.

I asked a question,
my mistake. . .
sweet became sour,
your eyes grew dark,
I was so blind,
you . . . changed.

I got nothing from it!
I will never love you!
DEA

A Dream CatcherA
Single,
Fluttering
dream
riding on back of a
nightmare.

It tries to pass
through the door
the gateway
and is turned away
along with its ride
why?

Because
The dream catchers web has snatched it,
it is caught,
prying its way through the sticky strings.
Desperate.
Hungry for fear.
And just like that . . .
The nightmare died with the sound of an awakening,
without that fear,
A nightmare cannot live,
but does it vanish into another realm?
Does become pure and another string of the web?
giving the dream catcher even more strength,

Another nightmare,
another death . . .
and another hope of a dream being born.
Bitter SilenceThe day has just begun,
but a familiar ending is near,
my walls naked,
stripped of their beauty,
boxes everywhere.

I can't express how much it hurts,
a silent pain,
how many times shall this sanctuary of mine change,
get smaller,
always afraid of the monthly fee,
the notice that consumes our door.

never comfortable,
never fearless,
never at home.

I just want to know what a home feels like,
not a temporary house,
money is valuable,
important,
and here you are wasting it for personal pleasure,
making us suffer,
making your own kids blind to what successful life is like.

One day I will be successful,
One day I will have a

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Name of Image Two AngelsTwo angels anchored to the wint’ry floor
Alone at last; sweet ev'rythings drift nigh
Straight-jacket wings, down fingers I adore
My feathers ruffled, longing so to fly
But whisp’ring angel, why won’t you take flight?
Snow curtain lifts; betrays his shackled feet
The weather dips, you won’t survive the night
In such ferocious wind and lack of heat
He hugs the fence, his fingers brush my cheek
Refusing tears won’t stop my being drowned
He knows goodbyes were never meant to speak
I bite and break the chain that leaves him bound
Two fallen angels steal the form of geese
But none confined the other can’t release
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Name of Image Trust is Hard to RepairTrust is Hard to Repair
15-2-13

Healing came with your words.
Words like ‘future’ and ‘love’ and ‘kids’.
It was only the second day we had spoken,
But you had ‘fallen in love’
With my voice and personality...

...”sing with me,” you said,
And I sang – our voices blending in harmony.

Pain came with your words.
Words like ‘friends’ and ‘distance’.
It was a week later,
But you were distracted while I was distraught...

...”goodbye,” I said,
And they were relieved when I came back.

Confusion came with your words.
Words like ‘mistake&rsqu
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Name of Image :: More Than You'll Ever Know ::Does it make you proud
When you're the cause of someone's tears?

Does it bring you joy
Every time you insult the innocent?

Do you know what you do
When you speak with your vicious tongue?

Do you realize what happens
Every time you laugh at another's sorrow?

You see a woman with male friends
And you accuse her of craving sexual attention.

You notice a boy wearing glasses
And you tease him with the name "four-eyes."

There's a group of peace lovers;
You proclaim they're annoying hipsters.

The teenage boys who love each other;
You tear them asunder by calling them abominations.

Do you find pleasure
In being the source of a poor soul's ago
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Name of Image *Dovecote*Silence so profound
Snow softly falling protects
White feathers flutter

2013 Delice1941
8th February2013
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17-2-13

Words of pleasure, words of hope,
Words of a future and of love.
Words strung together on a rope;
Useless, meaningless words.

Promises made, trust restored,
I’ll never do that to you again.
Words to heal and adore;
Useless, meaningless words.

Words to treasure, words to heal,
A sore heart believing in love again.
Words of trust to make a deal;
Useless, meaningless words.

Trust is broken, words mean naught,
You spoke in lies; silver tongued snake.
You have no idea of the pain you brought;
Useless, meaningless words.

You called me beautiful, and I believed,
You talked of a future, spoke of true love.
Then you
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J

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Mood: Joy *NearlyInvisibleMind Apr 30, 2013  New member Hobbyist Writer
It is wonderful here. Thank you :rose:
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Thank you :)
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AHH im so sorry, while uploading a piece of poetry, I accidentally clicked on an image !! please delete it :(
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Done :)
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thanks a bunch x
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Hey how are you!? Wow itīs been so long...I just wanted to say I may be coming back soon, itīs just Iīm so much busier than I used to be when I joined deviant...things change.. But I always remember this group because it was here where I submitted my very first writings, and I learnt a lot of things here, despite me speaking Spanish... well, I hope i find some spare time to submit my stuff eventhough high school keeps me busy!
hope you are all doing fine
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We are all doing well and whenever you find the time to come back you are always welcome.
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*EarthEmerald Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I just accidentally put my chapters 4 and 5 of my Legacy of the White Tigress in General Poetry ^^'. Could you please put them in General Prose? Thanks.
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done :)
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